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GESTATION
by Melissa Arel
You left a seed within me
and I felt it grow-
fighting for survival,
Until I gave birth to love
02/04/2003
Author's Note: Ok, I took everyone's advice.. it's no longer a roughdraft! ;-)
Posted on 02/05/2003
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/05/03 at 05:02 PM wow....very nice for rough draft...succinct and powerful |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/07/03 at 03:40 AM WOW! Superb analogy. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/07/03 at 08:15 PM Hmmm this is really a gripping analogy. Focused, succinct and forceful! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/09/03 at 11:07 AM Take out the "rough draft"..for it is apparent now you have planted a gem of a poem..and it has sprouted a star! |
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