| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/15/03 at 09:58 PM Awesome imagery..and breathtaking poetry...i stand and applaud! |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 01/16/03 at 09:30 PM and maybe....maybe love will come our way...and maybe, maybe hope will come to us again! Beautiful poem, Melissa. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/17/03 at 08:59 PM A romantic reverie in freshly expressed dimensions. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/18/03 at 02:27 AM Really like the soft peaceful tone and message of this Melissa. |
| Posted by Richard D Frederick on 01/18/03 at 11:13 PM interesting imagery and choice of words, i like it's refreshing tone. |
| Posted by Carl Walker on 01/20/03 at 05:19 PM I confess I always read others poetry through my own filters, I supose we all do. the capacity to capure a common emotion and express it is something I think you've captured here in a notable way. I feel the releasing of dreams, wishing for their return in fulfilment, but also a peaceful acceptance of those dreams that don't return; trusting in a matrix governed not by chance but by a person who cares for us ultimately
very nice work
thanks |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 05/20/03 at 07:44 AM very beautiful, I love the imagery |
| Posted by Rhodora M Fitzgerald on 05/20/03 at 10:59 AM This reminds me of the saying "if you love it, set it free.... if it comes back to you it was meant to be"..... Very lovely imagery in this poem! Very deserving of POTD! Nice job Melissa! |
| Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/20/03 at 01:21 PM do you have to be everywhere? LOL. congratulations on POTD. =) |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/20/03 at 01:46 PM the poet and the poem were already favorites of mine before this honor..Congratulations on a well-deserved POTD! |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/20/03 at 08:32 PM A beautiful and touching piece - excellent as POTD. Congrats! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/20/03 at 10:09 PM Since I've commented already I'll just say, "Congratulations on POTD" ! :) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/21/03 at 12:57 AM Good love poem Mel.....Charlie |
| Posted by Mike Loftis on 12/08/04 at 12:53 AM This poem is wonderful Melissa. I love the way you built it into an ongoing cycle. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/09/18 at 07:23 PM I just read this for the first time and it is oh so very lovely lady. george |
