| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/08/03 at 02:18 PM I like the off the wall abstract nature of this poem, Ginette. Fine work! Witty closure! |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/08/04 at 04:15 AM No it surely does not! Very uplifting and hopeful - in defiance of the initial "drowning" and "screaming" and vision of "black earth". Nicely done Ginette! :-) |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/01/08 at 01:10 PM Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by David Garner on 02/01/08 at 05:00 PM Love the directness of this quandry. I especially like the frankness of "I never even tried to save it." Excellent! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/01/08 at 06:21 PM I really enjoyed the listing of "how it got lost", and that you would admit not even trying to save it, but have that optimistic last line gives us all hope, I think. Thanks! Nice POTD. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/02/08 at 08:17 PM Contgratulations one POTD! Short but well said. We lose so many things in life and don't know what we had until we ask where it went. Life can be that way. Nice read. |
