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Mermaid

by Julie Adams


Waves of Atlantis
crash inside
tummy does
sumersaults in her
riptide love,

drawn in
tossled against
sharp coral,
I cry out
saltwater invades
my wounds

caught in the momentum
she pulls,
pushes away,
pulls harder
swimming through me

blue engulfs my intuition
like seaweed,
tangled, tickling
this mernaid's
silvery tail

12/05/2002

Posted on 12/05/2002
Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 12/07/02 at 04:37 AM

I swear that any poet worth his/her salt has written a mermaid poem! My favorite is Yeats (though most of his other stuff is over-rated).

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/26/10 at 12:57 PM

this poem enchants beyond spells. it brims and teases with language at once intriguing and evocative. simply said, it enthralls.

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