Lady of the Sea of Seven Sins
by Rommel Cruz
Fixated. Crystal pride waters enviously trickling
Down her arched, lustful skin
Clutched greedy hands flowing
With gluttony, voraciously encircling
Her insatiable belly. Ensnaring.
Anger for all eternity radiating. Unfading,
This Lady of the Sea of Seven Sins.
Author's Note: i limited this to 7 lines, im not sure if it was a wise move though; the 7 deadly sins are mentioned here, though im not sure one is evident.
Posted on 12/05/2002
Copyright © 2021 Rommel Cruz
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/05/02 at 07:03 AM|
only seven sins?? *wink*
|Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/05/02 at 02:55 PM|
Wonderful, vibrant imagery.
|Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/08/02 at 10:41 AM|
|Posted by Quinn Vokes on 12/09/02 at 01:57 AM|
wow! this is great. i do think the seven lines might have limited it a bit, but you did a great job with what you wrote. very well constricted.
|Posted by Don Coffman on 08/22/03 at 10:53 AM|
Seven lines, seven sins, worked out great. Clever and skillful.