| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Howe on 11/16/02 at 06:27 AM cool ..... how true ... nicely said ! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/17/02 at 02:59 PM hmmm....cats huh?
good haiku! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/18/02 at 05:26 AM Sometimes I can hardly understand how they (or even I) can tollerate my species. Cool, cat. |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 11/18/02 at 04:42 PM ummmmmm..... purring... at the clever poet... Great haiku ..... |
| Posted by JD Clay on 11/19/02 at 03:21 PM An independently cussed poem Dave. p |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/19/02 at 05:54 PM I like the haiku David, but why are the lines crossed out??? :o) |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 11/19/02 at 08:06 PM -laughing- this one made my day (as rissi bats my leg to play then bites my hand as I reach down to tease her...) |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 11/19/02 at 08:14 PM Do i see an innuendo here?hehe But this is so interesting and can take many meanings.
To answer Chris' question..It is the scratch caused by the cat's paw. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/20/02 at 02:04 AM Very clever, symbolism emphasized with the "cat scratches"! Little wording, great effect! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/20/02 at 02:49 PM Clever and nice anology |
