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Rainy days
by Rommel CruzRainy days...
Heaven crying hard again.
Wet streets.
Murky water pouring down the drain.
Rainy days...
Chilling breeze swirling, passing you by.
Scattered leaves.
Plastic wrappers decorating the angry skies.
Rainy days...
Steaming choco warming your hands.
Melted marshmallows.
"Little Women" parading in their gowns.
Rainy days...
Soft, heavenly music playing.
Closed, dreamy eyes.
Skin, sheets and pillows caressing.
Rainy days... 11/08/2002 Posted on 11/08/2002
Copyright © 2024 Rommel Cruz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 11/08/02 at 05:49 PM I kinda love those rainy days!!
Nice read. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/11/02 at 03:56 AM Good poem Rommel. One thing about rainy days,
you can get a lot done inside if you don't go
back to bed....Charlie |
| Posted by JD Clay on 11/11/02 at 04:07 AM Those rainy days just beckon for a big quilt, an old movie, a fire in the fireplace and a loved one to cuddle up with, eh! Nice work Rommel. Peace... |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 11/30/02 at 03:45 PM I've written on rainy days before. and each word captures it perfectly and differently.. very nice work. |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 12/02/02 at 04:10 AM This one takes me there--sharp perception and well created atmosphere. |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 05/02/03 at 02:48 PM I love rainy days :) I really liked how you described rain as Heaven crying.. that imagery fits perfectly. Great read :) |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 05/07/03 at 06:14 AM I love the imagery! Great job! |
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