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Your Foot Never Steps In The Same River Twice

by Melissa Arel



your foot never steps in the same river twice
the flowing, rushing water is ever-changing
always reborn, always re-inventing itself
pushing foward, never looking back
and eventually its efforts are rewarded
for every stream leads to an ocean

01/20/2001

Posted on 11/01/2002
Copyright © 2025 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Howe on 01/14/03 at 07:29 AM

and even the ocean is continually changing...nicely said melissa

Posted by Vimal Rony on 02/12/03 at 11:55 PM

What a profound and intelluctual thought.Great poem Melissa, certainly deserves to the poem of the day.Congrats.

Posted by JD Clay on 02/13/03 at 01:33 PM

A valuable lesson in your words Melissa. Congratulations on becoming Poet Of The Day. Peace...

Posted by Kate Demeree on 02/13/03 at 01:36 PM

Hearty Congratulations Mel on POTD!!! Beautiful pic. and poem, from a beautiful poetess, inside and out.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/13/03 at 02:37 PM

hey, POTD: I guess this is not the time to say, "I told you so." Oh, heck, yes it is! Congratulations!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/13/03 at 04:49 PM

Eloquently written, beautifully illustrated. Congratulations on POTD!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/13/03 at 07:00 PM

Profound...very nicely put Melissa ...and congrats on having POTD! Well deserved.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/13/03 at 11:59 PM

An ocean of fun to read. Congratulations for poem of the day. Well deserved.....Charlie

Posted by Ann Krischus on 03/16/03 at 01:16 PM

I see this has been POTD; certainly much deserved.

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