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the inevitable joy of taking a walk
by Quinn VokesWalking in the woods I hear
birds sweetly singing
the wind softly blowing
water magically flowing
Walking in the woods I smell
the fresh, clean air
filled with scents and
colors
Walking in the woods helps
me to be calm
be happy
and listen to God
He is speaking quietly in
the trees
the water
and through me 10/25/2002 Author's Note: ~I wrote this about a year ago, expressing my obvious feelings then. I look back on it now and feel nothing, b/c walking in the woods no longer has the same effect on me. I wish it did, but I guess I've changed(and it doesn't seem to be for the better).
Posted on 10/25/2002
Copyright © 2024 Quinn Vokes
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 11/13/02 at 04:11 PM This beautiful poem is a revelation. There is a wonderful lesson in your very words. Change is inevitable and the answers are not always clear. That however does not mean we should stop listening or walking. What is clear is why this piece was chosen for Poem Of The Day. Congratulations Quin, I hear you all the way.
Peace...
Peace... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/13/02 at 09:08 PM Thanks for this fresh stroll. Your poem is a delight... just recently had a good walk in a nature preserve near my home... nice to breathe the fresh air and take in Mother Earth.
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| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/13/02 at 10:01 PM Serene and soothing. Balm to the soul. Your lovely picture of a great place to communion with the Lord. Reminds me of Jesus "going off to a solitary place to pray". Lovely poem. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/14/02 at 02:27 AM Simple yet wonderful vivid poem. Love the positive vibes throughout. Congrats on being POTD! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 01/22/03 at 09:44 AM simple and wonderful. i'm sorry i missed it as the potd. i also very much agree with what jd said. |
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