Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/22/02 at 12:11 AM Wonderfully, succinctly descriptive of the earth. Suggestive of the interrelatedness of the sea, stars, and wind; perhaps also of the dominant role the wind plays in all of it. |
Posted by Richard Paez on 10/22/02 at 05:34 AM and your song/
it carries far/
brother |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/26/02 at 03:31 AM I am not to fond of Haiku but this one is an
exception. Good work Jadi...Charlie |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 04/02/03 at 03:41 AM you capture the diversity and the unity of the planet with strength and simplicity. Well done, jadi. |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/23/03 at 05:28 PM Simple, and yet so very effective. |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/01/04 at 11:53 AM and no lambskin 'o wine to call mine. Love the concept Jadi. |
Posted by Sam Roberts on 10/25/04 at 02:31 AM wow, i'm liking your haiku's very much indeed. One wind, but the most powerful is what i see in this. Lovely imagery xoxox |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/11/05 at 08:37 PM incredible, I'm in awe. |
Posted by Paul Marino on 09/14/05 at 09:21 AM wow |
Posted by Alisa Js on 12/16/06 at 09:13 PM the wind of love.. indeed... from this romantic soul.. I could hear the music, ah yes.. aloha..;-) |