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Shiki haiku 47

by JD Clay

 

 

 

seven seas

ten thousand stars

one wind

 

 

 

 

 

06/15/2001

Posted on 10/21/2002
Copyright © 2024 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/22/02 at 12:11 AM

Wonderfully, succinctly descriptive of the earth. Suggestive of the interrelatedness of the sea, stars, and wind; perhaps also of the dominant role the wind plays in all of it.

Posted by Richard Paez on 10/22/02 at 05:34 AM

and your song/ it carries far/ brother

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/26/02 at 03:31 AM

I am not to fond of Haiku but this one is an exception. Good work Jadi...Charlie

Posted by Glenn Currier on 04/02/03 at 03:41 AM

you capture the diversity and the unity of the planet with strength and simplicity. Well done, jadi.

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 10/23/03 at 05:28 PM

Simple, and yet so very effective.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/01/04 at 11:53 AM

and no lambskin 'o wine to call mine. Love the concept Jadi.

Posted by Sam Roberts on 10/25/04 at 02:31 AM

wow, i'm liking your haiku's very much indeed. One wind, but the most powerful is what i see in this. Lovely imagery xoxox

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/11/05 at 08:37 PM

incredible, I'm in awe.

Posted by Paul Marino on 09/14/05 at 09:21 AM

wow

Posted by Alisa Js on 12/16/06 at 09:13 PM

the wind of love.. indeed... from this romantic soul.. I could hear the music, ah yes.. aloha..;-)

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