Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Laura Doom on 06/02/07 at 11:47 PM Is it worth taking a wild guess? |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/14/08 at 01:05 PM Very nice Kristine. Excellent buildup to and closing off in those last two lines. Congrats on POTD! |
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 09/14/08 at 02:21 PM Very nice. Like Chris, I really enjoy the way the last two lines pull this to a close (or an opening). |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/14/08 at 04:00 PM Congrats on POTD!!! |
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/14/08 at 08:13 PM Congrats on POTD Kristine. Great write |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/14/08 at 08:23 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Kris. He
should listen....CharMin |
Posted by Tricia Marie Miel on 09/15/08 at 01:23 AM Congrats on POTD! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/15/08 at 01:48 AM Congrats on POTD and extra kudos for publishing!! A lovely write. |