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crashing
by Omi Salaveathe soul consumed by a raging sea
thoughts collide against weathered rocks
sand fills my mouth with salted silence demanded
in vain a storm should battle against these emotions...
rainclouds defeated by the angered armies of my heart. 01/13/2002 Posted on 01/13/2002
Copyright © 2025 Omi Salavea
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/11/14 at 12:41 PM congratulations on POTD. This is a lovely ode. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/11/14 at 03:47 PM Congrats on POTD! Strong, effective language in this. Hard to forget these images. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 12/12/14 at 02:38 AM I love this! ...sigh....
It's like true poetry to my soul...
I'm adding my POTD to the score... :-}~
Lovely |
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