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crashing

by Omi Salavea

the soul consumed by a raging sea
thoughts collide against weathered rocks
sand fills my mouth with salted silence demanded
in vain a storm should battle against these emotions...
rainclouds defeated by the angered armies of my heart.

01/13/2002

Posted on 01/13/2002
Copyright © 2019 Omi Salavea

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/11/14 at 12:41 PM

congratulations on POTD. This is a lovely ode.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/11/14 at 03:47 PM

Congrats on POTD! Strong, effective language in this. Hard to forget these images.

Posted by A. Paige White on 12/12/14 at 02:38 AM

I love this! ...sigh.... It's like true poetry to my soul... I'm adding my POTD to the score... :-}~ Lovely

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