| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/17/02 at 04:56 PM Soul warming read ... Just amazingly...wow!
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| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/18/02 at 01:49 AM A great love poem Jadi....Charlie |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 08/17/03 at 04:59 AM That's beautiful Jadi. I can feel the heat coming off of it! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 08/17/03 at 06:46 PM What a beautiful love poem! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 08/18/03 at 02:34 PM Oh, such passion, such sweet surrender. Lovely. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/19/03 at 12:01 AM It's been a while since I've read this last and I was pleased to see it appear again. Such great lines and emotions in this piece leading up to the perfect ending. Great job! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/19/03 at 12:37 AM Provacative piece jadi. With steamy stanzas like this carried in one's heart, I'm sure they could melt any cold spot in the universe. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 05/25/04 at 03:31 PM jadi, unusual poem for you in its rhyme, but it is a real delight to read. It burns with that red love. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 07/31/04 at 04:23 PM "devour me if you must"... ::claps hands::... i LOVE this piece... you write the best love poems... blessings... |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 10/10/07 at 07:09 AM This was the first poem to wink it's welcome on my return to PPS. It has been sitting patiently waiting, wondering if and when m.a would enter, adventure into this space her thoughts. Today it found me again, and I am drawn to heartspeak in the comment-box. The energy, the passion, the vibrance with which 'The Love In Which I Fell' opens all my senses, is the force that has become familiar to me. I surrender to the knowing it enters subtle as breath, sweeps me away to unimagined heights, where I become the air and the flame in a oneness with the breath of a poet whose words are embers flowing my veins - that ignite, throb and melt me like no other. It is a privilege to be here to read such gems. It is a privilege to be here to experience Jadi, Maestro and Angel. For you, Poet my first comment. Lovelight&peace *maria angelina |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/02/09 at 04:54 PM Great love poem- rich with emotion and passion! |
| Posted by Peggie Eng on 02/01/10 at 02:00 AM Words fail... beautiful....... |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 12/01/11 at 12:22 AM Oh how I can feel such coldness, alone, without..we are most alone when the world appears to be even larger than it is..heartfelt and I can say I couldn't have said it as well. :) |
