| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/16/02 at 04:52 PM hehe...great way of describing/looking at it Bruce. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 04/26/03 at 04:54 AM beautiful, those dancing sparks such a surprise at the end |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 12/11/03 at 08:52 PM I love it, being a smoker myself :)
I am obsessed with poems about cigarettes, It is the only thing I enjoy writing about.
You have done this very well indeed, they are such pretty little things.
Best wishes x |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 01/20/04 at 08:48 PM powerful haiku... |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 07/09/04 at 10:06 PM excellent imagery |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 08/14/08 at 04:11 PM that's it! i've seen it a million times, but that's it..in black and white. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/06/08 at 06:38 PM How lucky am I to have found this little gem hidden away in your library. Very vivid! |
| Posted by Carolyn Coville on 08/13/12 at 06:59 PM "asphalt fireflies" is brilliant! Way to make smoking seem pretty :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/30/13 at 06:33 PM Congrats on POTD Bruce. Well deserving. |
| Posted by Gilly Wigley on 12/01/13 at 01:05 AM I never thought of it that way, but now I will forever think of asphalt fireflies when I see someone toss one out their window. :) Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/01/13 at 04:58 AM Good to see this as POTD!
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