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Rain poems
11/17/2002 02:45 a.m.
I just noticed that the poems I like the most among my works are those that have something to do with rain. "Rainy Days", "Paperboat" and of course my FAVORITE "Life Washed Away". They're also similar in other ways, in that they repeat lines. This is most evident in Life washed away and Rainy days as I repeated the lines at least 4 times in each! LOL. These poems also deal with different topics. Paperboat is a happy/reminiscing poem, Rainy days, which was originally titled Lazy days, was well about how lazy I feel when it's raining. Life washed away, the longest of all I've written, is about well you guessed it, life!. LOL. (Who am I talking to anyway, as if anyone reads this. Oh yeah, Anne did one time. But will she read again?). I wonder, will anyone figure out the use of repeating lines in this one? Well yes it's for some sort of transition, but for what? Hmmm, I aint saying. bleh. LOL

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More traffic
11/16/2002 06:30 p.m.
Things are slowing up in my pages. =((( Why are you people not reading! Pathetic, aint i? lol dont answer, im pretty sure you'd say yes anyway.

Ive been meaning to write about broken angels with shattered wings but instead, i turned up with "the strong crumbles" the other day. i just cant put together the words together. also there's another poem after asking the rain to wash away the pain, to drench the sorrows... things like that. And like the broken angels, they're just words floating in my mind. Ill give form to them hopefully soon.

Now i need to sleep, it's already 2:30 here and im sure the doctor will not be very happy with this.

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Problems
11/15/2002 12:55 p.m.
Things are just not so good lately. Health problems with me and a close relative and bad investment. It's like i have this long years of virtually problem-free and now they all come up all of a sudden. I know they aint much, but when you havent experienced many trials you can get a bit overwhelmed. I wont be writing more details as of now. Maybe some other time.

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Dream
11/15/2002 08:15 a.m.
I had a reall weird dream. I was just so mad in it, that i wanted to kill someone. And i woke up shouting. And the person i wanted to kill was someone i really know. I dont understand, was that a sign of hidden hurts or something? Just weird

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50+ reads
11/11/2002 01:33 p.m.
I have more than 50 reads today! Now talk about being obsessed with hits. LOL, It just feels great that there people actually reading and appreciating my stuff. Well I got to go and sleep now. I need to go to the doctor early. I hope diagnosis is good.
I am currently Happy

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Traffic on my pages
11/11/2002 01:20 a.m.
I checked the number of visits on my poems and I'm happy that I have more than 50 reads in less than 2 weeks. Now for some of you, that's a very small number, but that's a LOT to me. I havent had traffic in my pages for a long time (maybe because I was also dormant for months. check on the dates on the poems and you'll see how inactive I was.) so that 50 is really something for me. =)




I am currently Happy

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