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Color me flushed

by Patricia J Reed

How i love your art work As you paint with your tongue And dip into the color of love Your strokes are amazing They show me a world Where stars of pleasure flash And song is eminent You enjoy your craft as you listen To the environment you create And I imagine I am helpless As your hands draw upon my canvas

09/01/2002

Posted on 09/01/2002
Copyright © 2024 Patricia J Reed

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Uriel Tovar on 06/27/05 at 02:39 AM

okay. wow hehe glad i ran into this one

Posted by Amy Wustrin on 07/19/05 at 01:42 AM

Really awesome. Very effective use of metephore! I like it!

Posted by Mo Couts on 06/30/11 at 02:59 AM

The metaphor is extended without being cliche and delivered in a beautiful fashion without being lewd; nicely done!

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