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eyes already looking down

by V. Blake

chalk lines
on a city
drawn semi-
to judge by
the vibrance
days after
a rain.
 I mean.

straightforward instructions.
new ones, since last

dance left.
shimmy right.
jump over the wormhole.

easy as all that.

do something dumb
in public
and laugh at yourself.

the colors are childish
and the handwriting is
better than mine.

an inconsequence

so achingly beautiful
as to be awesome in a
sense of the word
that we cannot
or do not
use anymore
on a path that
has gone
so dull
and so

this year.

i do not
know you,
you mean


Author's Note: I really like this one.

Posted on 12/14/2020
Copyright © 2021 V. Blake

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/14/20 at 08:46 PM

I really like it too- Loved the ending!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/29/20 at 09:03 PM

I really like this one, too. Hope lives in this poem, color, instructions to move forward, I think. "so achingly beautiful" Thanks, Vince.

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