by Laura Doom

"five seven five"
three eight six(?)
nine one one!


Author's Note: replacing the obvious with the obsolete

Posted on 02/22/2020
Copyright © 2021 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/26/20 at 06:01 AM

Ha! Enjoyed the "dialogue"? you have going on there. I was stumbling around online finding multiple meanings for 386 including an angel number. Who knew?! :)

Posted by Paganini Jones on 03/22/20 at 06:05 PM

Mmm - now I feel obliged to call this traditional, traditional variant and, Ooh - a new form! I have to try writing one. (I do realise this is a misreading of your poem)

Posted by Rob Littler on 04/19/20 at 11:18 PM


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