by Laura Doom
"five seven five"
three eight six(?)
nine one one!
Author's Note: replacing the obvious with the obsolete
Posted on 02/22/2020
Copyright © 2020 Laura Doom
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/26/20 at 06:01 AM|
Ha! Enjoyed the "dialogue"? you have going on there. I was stumbling around online finding multiple meanings for 386 including an angel number. Who knew?! :)
|Posted by Paganini Jones on 03/22/20 at 06:05 PM|
Mmm - now I feel obliged to call this traditional, traditional variant and, Ooh - a new form! I have to try writing one.
(I do realise this is a misreading of your poem)
|Posted by Rob Littler on 04/19/20 at 11:18 PM|