down by the Spree
just you and me
we see an otter
fishing slyly
as heron
waits superior
on other bank
as the sky grows
red round setting sun
high above
a crescent moon
appears almost
to mock
she kisses me
as swallows sweep
the stream for
incautious flies
zigzagging above
water boatmens'
anarchic thread
I wonder this
as dusk besets
if love we have
will last full term
or will the pressures
of life itself
tear us apart
or will it be
a slow decay
as sun drops now
without at trace
Nice write sir! And how does love fail? Mostly I think because for some reason we stop listening to our wife or husband and no longer use other forms of communication. george
I like the images of nature throughout. They evoke so many memories of places I've been and scenes I've witnessed. The title I kept in mind til the end and then you speak of another glow. I like the parallels between nature, the physical world, and our emotional and spiritual lives. I find it refreshing. Thanks Peter.