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by Nancy Ames

"A boozer
is a loser,
walking on a lake.

If it weren`t for him,
I could almost swim,
excuse me, my mistake."


Author's Note: just a little something I pulled from the bottom of the pile today and thought, "Neat".

Posted on 03/18/2018
Copyright © 2022 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/19/18 at 11:46 AM

Love the off centeredness of this piece, and that seeming disparate and unexpected line at the end which sets off the fuse.

Posted by George Hoerner on 05/17/18 at 09:17 PM

Cute very Cute

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