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Breathwork Poetry #3

by Julie Adams

the horizon is vast and hungry
many paths are present
I dream, a child again

in this realm of love, I learn
to wander all I am and could be
and taste my ripeness

the universe is our book
to swallow; each page to feel and fill:
a chance to create organically


Posted on 02/19/2016
Copyright © 2021 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/20/16 at 05:14 PM

Interesting to think of the horizon being as hungry as I perceive the writer to be. I like the use of "organically" here. Thanks.

Posted by Rob Littler on 02/20/16 at 10:28 PM

the universe is our book
to swallow

...my ever-expanding stomach likes the taste of this.

Posted by George Hoerner on 03/01/16 at 11:06 PM

At least we each get a chapter if we are willing to write in it! Nicely done lady! You have definitely written a chapter and know doubt more!

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