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remembering

by Peter Humphreys

be I
sitting here alone
writing
as the winter sun
blinds then hides
and blinds again
the bright low
merciless light

be I sitting here
as winds
that blow the hands
and brittle fingers be
as I squint
in time
to leafless trees
outside my window
bow and wave to me
ironically

be I sitting here
dreaming of kinder days
when swifts and swallows
swish slice
the azure sky
and I still
sitting be
look out upon
the glistening pasture
regal trees and
heathered mountains

remembering
just remembering
the still slow
slanting sun
the day
when we were
one

01/15/2016

Posted on 01/15/2016
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/18/16 at 05:04 PM

I enjoyed the phrasing in this nostalgic piece, the play of light and wind, the "swish slice" of birds, your wonderful alliterative lines. Thank you.

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