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Impression 09

by V. Blake

everything looks
like a movie
and my mouth
tastes like blood.
you are not who
i thought you'd be;
i am a drop in you,
you are a flood to me.
it's just hard
to see the difference
at the end.

10/18/2015

Posted on 10/18/2015
Copyright © 2023 V. Blake

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Colleen Sperry on 10/19/15 at 12:27 AM

very interesting poem!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/20/15 at 12:20 AM

Really an interesting way to describe a relationship.

Posted by Rob Littler on 10/20/15 at 03:19 PM

each line a mantra

Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 11/11/15 at 02:54 PM

This is amazing!

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