Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 05/26/15 at 07:57 PM There's a lot of good in this. Particularly, the penning out the heart, "You've ducked behind a cloud
Like a debtor moon avoiding the claimant gaze
Of her earthly lover" and that last stanza. It would be a completely different world if all the words built up inside could reign in the absent. I'm not sure it would be better, but different. |