Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/18/15 at 01:20 AM A more morose poem I have not read, Peter. Creeping under the linden is such an effective means of taking me on this dark journey, I am forced to follow, completely curious as to the goal and outcome. Some fine alliterations in this - knees that "crink cranked", "grief and guilt". My favorite lines - "my heart beat beat a beat so fast". Thanks for this. |