Errors in the Syntax

by Alison McKenzie

I need to stop
Searching for the mystery
In this sea of language

I dive deep,
Linking random expressions,
Finding the clues in the syntax,
Connecting invisible dots.

Until I realize,
You are not speaking to me.

(no one speaks to me)

You are not speaking to me.


Posted on 02/07/2015
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/10/15 at 03:57 PM

This poem certainly speaks to me, Ali. It really expresses longing, realization(false or not), a desire to be a part of something or someone. Well done.

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