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I'm no longer bitter, just empty to the brim
by Jolie JordanI was your someone
And I was my own
But now I divide up our belongings
And I leave you here alone
If I have been replaced
And your heart is closed to me
Then I will exit as you came
And leave behind the key. 01/27/2015 Author's Note: I don't usually rhyme but this one came out in less than 2 seconds, I think it's been floating around in my brain for the past week.
Posted on 01/27/2015
Copyright © 2024 Jolie Jordan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 01/27/15 at 02:22 PM *****STELLAR***** |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/30/15 at 04:24 AM My favorite part is in the title. "Empty to the brim." |
| Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 01/30/15 at 10:52 PM Love it! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/01/15 at 02:05 AM I agree - great title. This moves quickly to the end, nice rhyming which seems to fit well. It feels as though much had been resolved before this was written. A clean exit. |
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