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Some people just look better dead
by Desdemona SinestraCancel the wedding
Burrow into the bed
RSVP eyes
A moonlike pallor
Agent Provocateur
And my family is worried about me
Empty sentiment
I stopped bleeding
Because my blood is frozen
Happy Holidays
Maybe after the autopsy 11/15/2014 Posted on 11/15/2014
Copyright © 2024 Desdemona Sinestra
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/15/14 at 07:22 PM You've got a real knack for condensing thought. That title is killer (sorry for the pun), so much to relate to here in life's hopes and dreams, sometimes smashed to smithereens. Thanks for this. |
| Posted by June Labyzon on 11/16/14 at 01:23 PM "And my family is worried about me," That line ties it all together. It explicitly unravels the entire story. This poem hits the page with a force. Nice Read. |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 11/17/14 at 07:35 PM New T-shirt "Maybe after the Autopsy" |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/10/17 at 11:39 PM Good to read this again and see it as POTD! Congrats!
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