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Inertia

by Anita Mac

I see you
through the years,
still as a fog’s residue on a windowpane.

There is a glimpse
    sometimes
    somewhere
behind the tears…
Something completely unmoving in your eyes
    that Moves me so.

07/30/2014

Author's Note: Rusty...

Posted on 07/31/2014
Copyright © 2025 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/31/14 at 01:49 PM

wonderful imagery. beautifully rendered with a tinge of sadness.

Posted by Laura Doom on 08/02/14 at 10:26 AM

The tears on your window are Moving; the irony of inertia [your titles are pristine...]

Posted by Laura Doom on 08/23/15 at 12:15 PM

Rust is a perverse phenomenon; as a metaphor, the cure is an increase in oxygen; deep breathing...

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