In the... by Joe Cramerin the missing of you
I find that I am dreaming too
it is all that I can do
when words fly, far from few
I wait, I wonder
as my thoughts go asunder
lost and forever alone
as my mind does roam
in the longing for the dreams
to me, it simply seems
that all I have are screams
and I am left to my means
this is the sordid life that I live
after giving all that I have to give. 07/02/2014 Author's Note: ... recent angst.....
Posted on 07/02/2014 Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by George Hoerner on 07/02/14 at 01:35 PM Well done Joe. Angst is a bitch! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/02/14 at 03:08 PM Great rhyme and alliteration here to back up the message. Like much! |
Posted by A. Paige White on 07/06/14 at 03:28 PM Straight onto my favorites list. I definitely have had the same inspiration to have written it myself but not the talent. Thanks for expressing some of my recent angst so well! |
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 07/07/14 at 05:59 AM Although you say it's angst... It reads to me as lonely and heartbroken - but we always put our own spin on it depending where we are in our life and our perspective. I so understand. I wish you well and thank you for sharing this. I so feel the longing in this... ~N |
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