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06/10/14

by Uriel Tovar

Nothing compares to a sunset in Maui
Being in the water
As the sun fizzles in the horizon
Dissolving into the sea
Turning a clear blue water into an orange Kool-Aid
Glycerin mixture breaking
Upon your feet
The sounds of the waves
Rustling in the background
Of a lazy town as it
Settles from sleepy to dreaming
Slipping away into the dark
Night sky.

06/10/2014

Posted on 06/10/2014
Copyright © 2024 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 06/11/14 at 12:25 PM

***stellar*** [love this word painting!]

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/17/14 at 07:57 AM

Love

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/20/14 at 10:16 PM

Quite elegant...a pleasure to read...ingest with the mind and soul.

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