| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/28/14 at 03:19 PM I really enjoyed the movement in that first stanza that brings me into this, the flow of the river, the train (the snail). All the "h" words in S2 are very effective. The wandering dog adds a random yet shared element. I did not know you had sugar beets there as we do here. This ends on a somber note, thoughtful. |