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Sunday Morning Coming Down

by Jared Fladeland

There is no feeling
like the grease paint
on my face
of an un-showered morning.

My brain has a predisposition
to want more than I have,
ache for what is not true,
and turn fiction into fact.

My body is taffy,
women are the gravitational pull in all directions.
I drip like coffee
through the filter of urban voodoo economics.

I just want to be among the redwoods,
breathing in the pine,
and be at peace knowing that I'm not smelling
the inside of my own coffin.

04/20/2014

Posted on 04/20/2014
Copyright © 2026 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 04/20/14 at 05:54 PM

This poem has been my life. May I join you in the redwood? Nice write.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/20/14 at 07:23 PM

Loved the body being taffy, the whole coffee filter and urban voodoo economics, and thinking about those last two lines. Well done.

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