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by June Labyzon

Fall

he fell hard
on a soft carpet
and all his words
are forever bruised
purple and black
phrases
too bitter
for me to
digest
me,
who loved
from afar
though never
dared to say
and became
bruised nonetheless

03/06/2014

Posted on 03/06/2014
Copyright © 2021 June Labyzon

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/07/14 at 01:24 PM

I dare to say June. I love your ode, the reading of which obliterates distances and bruises and makes one well on the way to healing such.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/07/14 at 10:06 PM

This poem says to me that romance is only meaningful if both get on the same page.

Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 10/21/14 at 05:42 AM

. . . I like the acknowledgement of honest bruises at a distance (I know them too well). Nice work.

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