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Odin's Charge

by Johnny Crimson

They made amends
with the coming curse
as stable swords
gave hollow birth

to riders edge
as storm approached
a feeble winter
the scarlet broach

that held her dowry
a family's worth
between her breastplate
the withces stir.

Pushing forward
through the snow
they came to rest
their shields and bows

and staffs and riches
though there were few
were all laid down
as the virgin bruised.

They filled a stein
with gathered blood
and made their footsteps
a crimson mud

for all the wasters
and wallowing holes
to step where they had
to share their soles.

When graduation came
we flicked our cigarettes
from atop the belltower
and kissed drunkenly throughout the ceremony
while drinking a bottle of boone's farm
as your walkman played "hit me with your best shot"
into both of our ears.


01/07/2014

Posted on 01/07/2014
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/07/14 at 05:11 PM

Bringing myth and legend into the present as symbolism. Sharp images.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/07/14 at 09:32 PM

Yeats said, it is the sound he strived for not meaning, necessarily and when the two perchance collide in one ode, you have what you have written.

Posted by Steve Michaels on 01/29/14 at 06:52 PM

That last stanza left my mind raped and pillaged due to its lack preparedness for such a willful end!

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