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by Jon-Jacob F Deal

Still exhaling clouds
A nicotine conga line
The smokers trudge in


Posted on 12/07/2013
Copyright © 2021 Jon-Jacob F Deal

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/07/13 at 12:09 PM

your Winter Scene paints a great metaphor.

Posted by Linda Fuller on 12/07/13 at 07:49 PM

Smokers are a dying breed...your haiku (or senryu?) paints a vivid picture.

Posted by Veronica Phoenics on 12/09/13 at 12:42 PM

very nicely done! I instantly saw this in my mind's eye.

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