by Maria Francesca

I called you ugly
dull and fat

I called you stupid
after that

I told you
you could go to hell;

I didn't mean it -

I said I'd gladly see you dead
and sent you off
to soak your head

I criticised the way you smell
but I was kidding -

The truth is that
I like your face,
your gentle smile and simple grace

the easy way you cast your spell;
you've caught me cleanly -

Locked up in your tender cage
but I am not an open page

the secret's mine -
I'll never tell

I hate you, love you


Posted on 11/21/2013
Copyright © 2023 Maria Francesca

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/24/13 at 06:11 PM

This is definetely deserving of the rating Brilliant. Playful, fun, yet the serious side of it speaking loud n' clear. Takes "secret admirer" to a whole new fantastic level. And yes got me LOLing.

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