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its all bullsh*%
by Christel CrewsStepping out into this world
everywhere I turn
there stands before me
A picture-perfect image
of the life I was supposed to have
Please don't tell me to be patient
Don't recommend prayer
Don't explain that you have troubles too
Please, just for today, just smile
and walk away 01/30/2013 Posted on 11/10/2013
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/10/13 at 02:59 PM Wow! This a side of you I've never seen before Christel, and I like it. Anger well placed in expressing frustration with the material superficial world, and how it impacts the soul. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 11/10/13 at 04:06 PM Well stated ... well understood |
| Posted by Maria Francesca on 11/13/13 at 06:10 AM ....so it's not just me? |
| Posted by Steve Michaels on 11/13/13 at 11:07 PM Yes - sometimes we need to guard our right to feel discontent no matter what! |
| Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 11/14/13 at 12:24 AM And yowl you shall, into the night, into the air, and into the faces of the crowd. |
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