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Dying in the Old Car Lot

by Kristina Woodhill


detroit dark red
pickled beet
juice
runs
fast,
hot,
steams
deep

soaking
fingered
cuts,
keen nicks,
staining
as I weep

for cities
peeling asphalt
back
where once
black dotted
lines

assured
its masses
signing pens
inked,
naming
glutton
times

man, we built a legacy
gal, we chained a cloud
threw our tools in just one well
its waters cooled our engines proud

we tightened but one bolt


detroit dark red
pickled beet
juice
dyed
beneath
my union
nails

I'll be filing
bits
of color
flung
into
my old
lunch
pail

filled
with
foot long
promises
mayonnaise
on
heels
of
wry

boiled
eggs
telling
yolks
of baskets
claiming
one
will do
or die

man, we built a legacy
gal, we wooed the crowds
back-up plan in some back pocket
spare tire pressure can't be found

we tightened but one bolt

08/08/2013

Posted on 08/09/2013
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 08/09/13 at 01:27 AM

What can I say, I was one of those. Before I became a salaried employee I worked a few summers in "the rouge". I worked on the final assembly line, the engine line, operated a heavy press, and worked in the "iron foundry". I saw a lot learned a little about people of "the working class" although it was only one part of it. Enjoyed the read lady!!

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