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The Ballad of Seth and Rose

by Linda Fuller

A slash of lipstick cut her face in two
reminding him of squirrels he had shot
their gutted corpses readied for the pot
souls held to bodies with a flimsy glue

Her fragile lids were coated cobalt blue
her lashes heavy with a bristled clot
a minty mouthwash masked a subtle rot
of tooth, he knew she didn’t have a clue

what fate awaited her and then he struck
a pose, a bargain, thirteen brutal blows
then listened as she took her final breath

He really hadn’t meant to go amok
but sense deserts a mortal in the throes
of teenage angst and moonshine mixed with meth.

07/27/2013

Author's Note: The rhyme scheme is that of a Petrarchan sonnet; the content, not so much.

Posted on 07/27/2013
Copyright © 2024 Linda Fuller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/27/13 at 08:00 PM

Eek! Deadly rhyming, this sonnet is loaded with vivid images and spells tragedy!

Posted by George Hoerner on 07/27/13 at 09:49 PM

Love the story lady and I suspect there may be more truth than fiction here, but I hope not. Take care.

Posted by Jim Benz on 07/28/13 at 11:26 PM

Brilliant. And I mean that sincerely. The content fits the form beautifully, and it takes my breath away. I've missed you Linda. Where've you been?

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