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Am I Poetry?

by John Harder

Prose flees my cranium
Feeling depleted
much like uranium
except my half-life
is a mystery

Rhyme seems obtuse
Thoughts have receded
yet still the abuse
Enduring such strife
Repeat history

Channeling haiku
Turns out it's futile
'twas never my forte
Structure is lacking
My life story

04/26/2013

Posted on 04/27/2013
Copyright © 2024 John Harder

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 04/27/13 at 04:26 PM

well i like it but i'm feeling really contrary these days. so how does that comment grab you? is that a contrary enough way to compliment a piece?

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/03/13 at 01:38 AM

I like this a lot actually. Well put together. Not awkward at all, and I can totally relate. Good to read you again John.

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