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Variable

by Anita Mac

Here you are
again.
Having something.
leaving me
struggling—
thirsting for
the unknown air around you.

04/12/2013

Posted on 04/12/2013
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/13/13 at 04:31 PM

Love the "unknown air" part. Excellent write.

Posted by Laura Doom on 04/14/13 at 11:09 AM

Extraneous variables can have that effect, confounding logic, inviting fermentation...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/26/13 at 06:59 PM

Love how this combines attraction...love, and atmosphere, hinting at the energy field that surrounds us and what can happen inside it.

Posted by Ariane Scott on 08/20/15 at 02:54 AM

MMmmm. Love this. The idea of "something" and "unknown"-- grasping for the nameless quench. This one leave me so hungry...

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