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never ending belief

by Carissa Dewey

I watched you tonight-
laying there.
Attention only on your
feelings.
your roiled eyes
and a foggy memory,
of our pervious nights

I can feel your moments
old touch,
those nights.
And that potent notion
that this may
be something.

And I believed.

03/16/2013

Posted on 03/17/2013
Copyright © 2025 Carissa Dewey

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/05/13 at 10:26 PM

Excellent concrete imagery in that first stanza, and spiritualism in the second.

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