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what is one saying
by Philip F De Pinto
what is one saying
when muttering the word console
but he is braying
like a wind - if he
has not convened to love she
beyond the word love
and what hope
is there for love
when you slide its foal
under microscope
to examine the combine
of hers and mine
to make a saying
but one is braying
like a wind - if he
has not convened with she
above and beyond the word love
02/08/2013 Posted on 02/08/2013
Copyright © 2024 Philip F De Pinto
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/08/13 at 08:40 PM My initial, instinctive response is, welcome to the world of making mistakes and less than perfect! Being one that's learning how to trust love, I wish you the very best with that. |
| Posted by David Maurice on 02/09/13 at 07:33 PM foal = soul to me. And this is delightful. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/09/13 at 10:36 PM Brilliant. |
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