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Bleed

by Steven Craig




For a Thorn on a rose

This is a very short prose

Something you heed

When you no longer bleed

Leap, flinch, pinch, suck clean after the gore

Find your hand back into it desiring some more.



02/08/2013

Posted on 02/08/2013
Copyright © 2024 Steven Craig

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/09/13 at 06:33 AM

I really like that fourth line. Nicely descriptive.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/09/13 at 07:56 AM

Ghoulish stuff, but not without its wit and charm, thanks to the choice of vocabulary and construction. Like Halloween in February.

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