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vintage surreal gangster cinema

by Gabriel Ricard

It wasn’t Halloween.
It wasn’t one of those awful goddamn
costume parties,
where everyone would rather just get stoned
and watch vintage Samurai cinema instead.

A man who got fat reading “War and Peace”
three times in a row just decided to show up
in a Snow White costume that wouldn’t have fit
a man even half his size.

A girl in a leather nurse’s outfit.
She doesn’t really dig on the whole saving lives scene.

Tweedledee was there.
Tweedledum was down to a black veil and wifebeater.

The Devil was Legion. Figures.

A higher power believed in the darkness
being able to pick off the lights in various hallways.

But it was a mansion. Plenty of dusty bulbs
to guide the desperate, lonely and frustrated
to the safety of a commonplace bedroom.

Complete with a commonplace view
of some strip of some kind of paradise.

And all the violent weather a person can eat.
More than enough to make leaves and branches behave like ghosts.
More than enough to think you really can be afraid of everything.

The windows were huge, were put in a century
and a half after the house was built and survived
a baptism, and just didn’t fit the rest of the place at all.

But practically no one cared. Anyone who did
was too nervous to do anything but laugh.

And the house band held everyone together with pins and string.
Mostly Rockabilly. A little John Lee Hooker and Blind Lemon Johnson
for when everybody just needed to calm the hell down.

A handsome kid dressed as a man dressed as an artist
who stays away from coffee, booze
and any wooden track roller coaster.

He’s swallowed whatever he accidentally crushed
in his pocket earlier, and he’s starting to forget
the name of the wife he came with.

She left hours ago. Love just happens like that.

Everyone just felt overdressed and old.

But they woke up when the house band played
something they had never heard before.


12/17/2012

Posted on 12/18/2012
Copyright © 2024 Gabriel Ricard

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/28/12 at 08:52 PM

Brilliant piece of work. Love the mixture of macabre and dark humour. On my nomination list for Nobel Prize for Unusual Writing, should they ever decide to add that category.

Posted by Laura Doom on 12/31/12 at 11:18 AM

evolution just wrote itself a new sequence...

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/01/13 at 03:26 PM

I'm still waiting for that copy of your Spillane-Hammettesque novel with your prose creating a character greater than Reacher or even Marlow. Excellent as always!

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