i woke this morning up there floating on cloud three some would say i should be higher up on cloud nine i’ve looked way up there and it seems too heady i’ve dipped my hand into the cloud trying to wash away all the sins of life but they will be muddy forever, as they are all original they are mine alone now this morning i saw the sun come up from the ocean dripping smiles funny, for i have not smiled except at myself since i found out what it means i will tell most anyone i have enjoyed most of my sins as i have hurt only a few but those i hurt will not forgive
11/23/2012
...gulp.
This one really hit the mark- great write
No excuses here. I liked "cloud three" and its level's explanation, the sun and its sunrise meaning escapes me, but I enjoyed this, George.