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heartbeat
by Emily Davidsonit was late
that time of night
close to dawn
when it always
rains
we were not embarrassed
by our closeness
unfamiliar but comfortable
he asked me to
feel his heartbeat
i could feel it
trying to escape 10/01/2012 Posted on 11/01/2012
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 11/01/12 at 03:38 AM this is gorgeous! what a picturesque scene painted with swift, crisp strokes! wrapping the reader into the moment. just love it! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/01/12 at 10:17 PM Oh, ouch. I also loved the quickly painted scene here. |
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