| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 10/19/12 at 10:17 PM I've never gotten into 'found' poetry but this is good. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/20/12 at 02:45 PM Fantastic. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/25/12 at 02:32 PM The way this is written took me into the scene and here I am inside this very small enclosed closet, there is no lid, there is only this poem this moment, thank you Jim |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 10/25/12 at 04:14 PM Like. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/25/12 at 06:38 PM The thing about total dark - "lid" is such a perfect term for how I feel when I'm in the total dark and begin my freaky, totally irrational thoughts. How to escape when I'm not even in danger is such a weird notion. The "floating" part makes me think of sensory deprivation in general. The flow is kept tense and moving fast with your word and idea breaks. I'd say this was worth finding. |
| Posted by Paul Lastovica on 10/28/12 at 11:58 PM An eye such as yours (as I imagine it) can find poetry any ol' place... Reminds me that I need to open my eyes and have a good look at & for poetry again, and soon. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/18/12 at 12:12 PM I found this
selectively disturbing
having been closeted as a lamb
in child's clothing... |
| Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 12/12/12 at 09:45 PM Oh man... this. So good. |
| Posted by Cole Miller on 03/12/13 at 02:22 PM being as claustrophobic as i am, this poem had my chest tightening. i'm always impressed by poetry that has a physical effect on me. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 01/02/14 at 12:02 AM Perhaps the intruder requires some airing? |
