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I Just Spoke With Her

by Joan Serratelli

I just spoke With her.
I’m worried; I’m frantic- -
my hands are tied.
I’m afraid for her.
I’m powerless
She cannot lose this battle
It’ll mean the war
She cannot lose
She will lose
Herself
PLEASE look after her
I can do no more
I've tried

09/11/2012

Posted on 09/11/2012
Copyright © 2026 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/11/12 at 03:40 PM

I like the tight feel to this, Joan, the intensity along side a letting go.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/11/12 at 06:32 PM

This makes my head hurt...but that is good, you convey the feeling right on. Like breaking the pencil while making an exclamation point! Thanks.

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